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Angel of Freedom WIP by KaisiShu Angel of Freedom WIP by KaisiShu
so I started with shading and everything :D It is going to be a black-white picture. No colouring. The one who wants that picture ( and who gets it ) wanted it to be it this way so yeah :D I still need to shade (?) the wings and the lower part of the dress :3
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xBlackHoney Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist
okay wo fang ich da am besten an.....
kleid....suüß <3
flügel.....voll flauschig <3
vogel........einfach goldig <3
der rest...............umwerfend <3 <3 <3
aber schade das du es in schwarz/weiß machen musstest :/ aber so siehts natürlich auch schön aus :)
ich kann mich auch immer nicht von bildern für andere trennen XD man hängt immer so sehr dadran >///<
KaisiShu Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
Awwwwwwwwwwww danke :D
Ja, ursprünglich wollte er es in Farbe haben, hat dann aber die skizze gesehen und wollte es dabei belassen, er hat gesagt, lass es schwarz-weiß, allerdings war das halt nur die skizze und ich musste ihm klar machen, dass das nicht wirklich schwarz-weiß ist XD
Jaaaaaa! Das ist echt übel. Ich meine bei manchen Bildern hätte ich vielleicht nicht solche Hemmungen sie wegzugeben, aber manche find ich einfach selber auch toll und da ist dass dann so ein Kampf. Aber versprochen ist halt versprochen XD
SkyChainer Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student General Artist
love the wings although the ribbon feels a bit stiff. but loving how you're trying out new poses well done1
KaisiShu Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
Oh okay thank you, do you have an idea how I could draw the ribbon better next time? :D Thank you :3
SkyChainer Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student General Artist
I don't mind the part which wraps around the arm but if you think about the bottom looping part near the elbow, it would be better if it draped a bit more downwards, (unless it's dew to pushing by the wind). and I think it'll also help if there was different types of shading on the ribbon as well, because I've noticed you've only used three shadings on the ribbon (lighter shading for the lighter parts, darker shading for the heavier parts, so there's more variation). The highlights on the ribbon seem to go in one straight line across the arm and that makes it seem more metallic, so I think it'll help if you placed it in different areas next time.

But either way I really like the palm you did. Well done!

(and sorry if the critique was too long....^^)
KaisiShu Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
Oh okay! thanks that will help a lot! I hope I will be able to consider this next time! I am going to make sure that I will! *-*

Thank you :D I am not that good with drawing hands, I actually hate it and if I draw them I often use pictures or stocks to see how the hand has to look like, but when I drew this picture I tried it without any help and it turned out like this :D I think I am especially proud about the hands here XD So thank you :D

( hey no worries, I do not get critiques that often, sometimes yes, but either they are of the opinion that the picture looks good or they are not saying a thing....and once a friend said: It is better that they write something instead of nothing, critiques are even better. But saying nothing at all is frustrating.)
SkyChainer Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student General Artist
oh I see your welcome ^^
DesoPL Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
WoW she look cute! :)
KaisiShu Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
thank you <3
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